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双提问报告雅思A类大作文分析

2017-03-07

来源:环球教育整理

小编:Jennifer 262
摘要:上周六的雅思考试中,A类的写作部分,一个双提问的报告问题跃然纸上。真可谓是千呼万唤始出来啊。整个2016年,此类提问方式居然只考了仅仅两个而已。

2017年3月4日雅思考试中,A类的写作部分,一个双提问的报告问题跃然纸上。真可谓是千呼万唤始出来啊。整个2016年,此类提问方式居然只考了仅仅两个而已。此次考试考生们有如此境遇,实属不易。此外,此题在2014年05月24日就和大家见过面。一个教育类的双提问报告,还有哪个题可以比这个更简单呢?

原题如下:

Many young people today leave school with a negative attitude towards learning. Why is this? And what can be done to encourage a positive attitude to learning in young people? 20170304

此类题目,说句过激的话,就是论点的简单堆砌,实无任何难度可言。只要考生能够针对题干中的两个问题,分别找出两个论点,此文可成矣。大可不必像议论性文章,大家还得表明立场,有逻辑地排列论点,甚至让步论证等。

Furthering education contemporarily is no longer an essential part of future plan among a considerable proportion of the young due to the ill-feeling they suffering from during schooling. As a result, the populace begins to realize that it is the high time for us to analyze reasons of this situation and means to tackle it.

开头段仍然是背景和点题。此类题目的背景句,也不用考生们花费任何时间思考,只是改写题干就可以。点题句子,自然就是针对这个现象的原因和解决方案的讨论。(注意:少部分的双提问报告,可能问题不是原因和方案,请考生注意审题。)

For one thing, both the distorted value system and stressful school life can be regarded as main reasons making young people dislike their study in school. To begin with, seemingly everyone in the entire society is pursuing material life, dreaming of purchasing luxury houses and extravagant cars. Once the young find out that schooling cannot bring what they want badly, they start to complain how useless education is for their dreamed life style. On top of this, horrible memory of school life is what tortures young people even after their graduation. Plenty of homework and a great number of exams are what students have to be confronted with every week, leaving seriously adverse impression for them.

主段一,回答题干中的第一个问题,既是造成这个现象的原因。其实对于原因的数量,题目并没有任何的要求。之所以都是两个原因,是篇幅限定。

For another, mass media and governments are supposed to work collectively to deal with this situation. Primarily, media are able to use their coverages to modify people’s value system, with emphasizing the significance of spiritual life and avoiding broadcasting misleading and negative information to the public. Undoubtedly, a good educational background does bring people more satisfaction to people’s mental life quality. Additionally, educational departments of governments must be responsible for releasing pressure of students, through designing interesting and effective curriculum. Reducing unnecessary homework and exams can enable students to have more time to get relaxation and do what they are really fond of.

主段二就是回答题干的第二个问题。如有可能,本段的两个方案可以针对上一段的两个原因。形成对应关系,显得文章逻辑更为严谨。其实,对应与否评分标准也无具体要求。能对应最好,不能对应也大可不必纠结于此。

In summary, in spite of negative feeling to learning that majority of young people have, as long as mass media and related governmental offices help the young build up a positive value system and provide less stressful learning environment, interest of learning will definitely be enhanced substantially among them.

结尾段的功能仍然是表明笔者立场,既是对前文的一个总结。是否在此需要对未来进行展望根本不重要。

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