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雅思到底需要怎样的句型?

2015-10-28

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  写作组——李菊

      在笔者教学中,每问及各位烤鸭雅思需要怎样的句型,答案总是:复杂的句子或长难句。但是观察学生的习作,尤其是分数集中在5分左右的学生的作文,我们不难发现句式的衔接过于单一,比如:"in our daily life, we always communicate information through the media, such as television, radio, film, these media have different advantages and disadvantages for us" (剑桥4-text1). 句子的连接逗号漫天飞,不知怎样的pattern是合适的(你中招了吗?)。

   

  1. 官方的复杂句要求

      为了解决这个问题,我们先来看看官方的抽象要求,即评分标准的描述(以7分为例):

   

  • Use a variety of complex structures
  • Produces frequent error-free sentences
  • Has good control of grammar and punctuation but may make a few errors

   

  综上:关键词有两个“a variety of complex structures" and "good control of grammar and punctuation". 那我们继续看官方对complex structure更为形象的示例:

   

  • 带从句的复合句

  e.g.  Whereas many people accept the need for exams, others are less convinced.

  • 复杂的名词短语

  e.g.   The most important reason for this problem is lack of resources and infrastructure.

  • 简化的从句

  e.g.   Finally, budget saved can be allocated to other aspects, such as education.

  • 复合动词

  e.g.   It is important to be able to use some of the structures listed here.

   

  1. 笔者的复杂句归类

  看到这,烤鸭们是不是有点感觉了,但笔者发现这是不够的。为了烤鸭对复杂句更加清楚,达到官方要求的多样化,先以一句为例,以多种方式表达,方便您模仿和学习。

  Air flight has greatly enhanced travelers' efficiency and this has changed this vast world into a small village.

   

  Air flight has greatly enhanced travelers' efficiency; therefore this vast world has been changed into a small village.

   

  这两种方式是以主句的形式连接,易错点是逗号不能衔接句子

  When Air flight has greatly enhanced travelers' efficiency, this vast world has been changed into a small village.

   

  Air flight has greatly enhanced travelers' efficiency, which has changed  this vast world has been changed into a small village.

   

   

  这两种方式是以从句的形式衔接句子

  Air flight has greatly enhanced travelers' efficiency, thus changing this vast world has been changed into a small village.

   

  Air flight has greatly enhanced travelers' efficiency, with this vast world being changed into a small village.

   

  这两种方式是以短语的形式衔接句子

   

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