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小编: 118在笔者教学中,每问及各位烤鸭雅思需要怎样的句型,答案总是:复杂的句子或长难句。但是观察学生的习作,尤其是分数集中在5分左右的学生的作文,我们不难发现句式的衔接过于单一,比如:"in our daily life, we always communicate information through the media, such as television, radio, film, these media have different advantages and disadvantages for us" (剑桥4-text1). 句子的连接逗号漫天飞,不知怎样的pattern是合适的(你中招了吗?)。
为了解决这个问题,我们先来看看官方的抽象要求,即评分标准的描述(以7分为例):
综上:关键词有两个“a variety of complex structures" and "good control of grammar and punctuation". 那我们继续看官方对complex structure更为形象的示例:
e.g. Whereas many people accept the need for exams, others are less convinced.
e.g. The most important reason for this problem is lack of resources and infrastructure.
e.g. Finally, budget saved can be allocated to other aspects, such as education.
e.g. It is important to be able to use some of the structures listed here.
看到这,烤鸭们是不是有点感觉了,但笔者发现这是不够的。为了烤鸭对复杂句更加清楚,达到官方要求的多样化,先以一句为例,以多种方式表达,方便您模仿和学习。
Air flight has greatly enhanced travelers' efficiency and this has changed this vast world into a small village.
Air flight has greatly enhanced travelers' efficiency; therefore this vast world has been changed into a small village. |
这两种方式是以主句的形式连接,易错点是逗号不能衔接句子 |
When Air flight has greatly enhanced travelers' efficiency, this vast world has been changed into a small village.
Air flight has greatly enhanced travelers' efficiency, which has changed this vast world has been changed into a small village. |
这两种方式是以从句的形式衔接句子 |
Air flight has greatly enhanced travelers' efficiency, thus changing this vast world has been changed into a small village.
Air flight has greatly enhanced travelers' efficiency, with this vast world being changed into a small village. |
这两种方式是以短语的形式衔接句子 |