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雅思小作文的3个误区解析

2017-09-13

来源:环球教育原创

小编:Jennifer 250
摘要:

雅思小作文,在很多烤鸭看来,是相对容易备考的。那么,问题来了。雅思小作文的3个误区,你中招了吗?

1、加入主观推测

雅思写作小作文追求客观性,切勿加入自己的主观推测,也不需要加上对图表的解释。

例:《剑11》Test 3

考生文章

The changes in emission of carbon dioxide can be connected with the changes in economical development and appearance of some new technologies which reduce emssions.

考官评语:

There are attempts at comparison, but there is some irrelevant material in the final paragraph.(最后一段有不相关信息)

例:《剑11》Test 2

考生文章

But in 2010 the number has decreased to 10%, which is good because it shows that more people have learned other languages well.

考官评语:

There is some repetition of information and some irrelevant commentary. (有不相关的评论)

2、缺乏数据的支撑

很多考生在对图表进行描述时,只关注于发展趋势,而疏忽了对重要数据的阐述。

例:《剑12》Test 7

考生文章主体段

The major changes can be seen in the groups, who eat in a fast-food restaurant on a weekly basis (once or several times a week) and in the groups in which people visit the fast-food restaurants once or twice a month or once a few months.

While in 2006 most of the US citizens ate at such facilities at least once a week, in 2013 most of the population did so only once or twice a month. It's clear that fast-food of the population did so only once or twice a month.

It's clear that fast-food restaurants were most popular in 2006 and least popular in 2013. However the number of people who eat in such restaurants only a few times every year didn't change.

考官评语:

The candidate organizes the information well and describes in the various groups, but the lack of data to support the description throughout the response is a significant omission.(整篇文章缺乏数据支撑是一个很严重的疏忽)

3、缺乏对比

小作文的题干对其写作有很明确的要求,"Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant". (在相关的地方作比较)所以,考生在对重要特点进行描述的同时,切勿忘记作比较。

例:《剑7》Test 1

考生文章主体段第一段:

Food, drinks and tobacco were in the most important position on consumer spending in all of the five countries, and in a different percentage. In Ireland and Turkey, they were near 30%, while in the other three countries they are under 20%.

考官评语:

There is no clear reference to what the percentage represent and key comparisons need more expansion.(关键的比较需要更多的阐述)

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