欢迎来到环球教育官方网站,来环球,去全球,名师高徒,高分留学!
来源:环球教育整理
小编:Jennifer 289雅思小作文,在很多烤鸭看来是相对容易备考的。那么,问题来了,雅思小作文的3个误区。你中招了吗?
雅思小作文的3个误区一:加入主观推测
雅思写作小作文追求客观性,切勿加入自己的主观推测,也不需要加上对图表的解释。
例:《剑11》Test 3
考生文章
The changes in emission of carbon dioxide can be connected with the changes in economical development and appearance of some new technologies which reduce emssions.
考官评语:
There are attempts at comparison, but there is some irrelevant material in the final paragraph.(最后一段有不相关信息)
例:《剑11》Test 2
考生文章
But in 2010 the number has decreased to 10%, which is good because it shows that more people have learned other languages well.
考官评语:
There is some repetition of information and some irrelevant commentary. (有不相关的评论)
雅思小作文的3个误区二:缺乏数据的支撑
很多考生在对图表进行描述时,只关注于发展趋势,而疏忽了对重要数据的阐述。
例:《剑12》Test 7
考生文章主体段
The major changes can be seen in the groups, who eat in a fast-food restaurant on a weekly basis (once or several times a week) and in the groups in which people visit the fast-food restaurants once or twice a month or once a few months.
While in 2006 most of the US citizens ate at such facilities at least once a week, in 2013 most of the population did so only once or twice a month. It's clear that fast-food of the population did so only once or twice a month.
It's clear that fast-food restaurants were most popular in 2006 and least popular in 2013. However the number of people who eat in such restaurants only a few times every year didn't change.
考官评语:
The candidate organizes the information well and describes in the various groups, but the lack of data to support the description throughout the response is a significant omission.(整篇文章缺乏数据支撑是一个很严重的疏忽)
雅思小作文的3个误区三:缺乏对比
小作文的题干对其写作有很明确的要求,"Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant". (在相关的地方作比较)所以,考生在对重要特点进行描述的同时,切勿忘记作比较。
例:《剑7》Test 1
考生文章主体段第一段:
Food, drinks and tobacco were in the most important position on consumer spending in all of the five countries, and in a different percentage. In Ireland and Turkey, they were near 30%, while in the other three countries they are under 20%.
考官评语:
There is no clear reference to what the percentage represent and key comparisons need more expansion.(关键的比较需要更多的阐述)