雅思大作文犯罪类话题梳理及应对

2017-11-28编辑: 焦佳音来自: 环球教育原创

犯罪类话题作为社会类话题的一个分支特别令人心塞,今天为大家梳理一下经典的犯罪类话题以及对应的论点表达:

是否区别对待

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Some people think that all the lawbreakers should be taken into the prison, while

others believe that there are better alternatives, (for example, doing some work or

learning some skills in the community).

Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Young people who commit serious crimes should be punished in the same way as

adults.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Young people who commit serious crimes, such as a rubbery or a violent attack

should be punished in the same way as adults.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

青少年犯罪

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In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are committing more crimes.

Why is this happening? How should children or teenagers be punished when they

break the law?

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In many countries, a high proportion of criminals' acts are committed by teenagers.

Why is it the case? What can be done tackle the trend?

相关论点:

1. 木有人能成为例外

No one could be excluded from justice, and only on this ground can

crime be expected to be prevented.

2. 关进监狱是确保其他公民安全的办法

Depriving a criminal of his or her freedom by imprisoning him or her

is a measure to provide a sense of security for the lawful citizens in

the society.

3. Dangerous criminals should be put behind bars until they are no

longer a threat to the public security.

4. 任何例外都会被认作是一种对于犯罪的容忍

Any exception would be taken as a message of tolerance of crime.

5. 有一些罪行不是很严重

However, most teenager crimes are minor, like vandalism, fighting or

theft which does not do serious harm to the victims.

6. 青少年犯罪为了吸引别人注意

Their immatureness and lack of self-discipline leads to their behaviors,

but they commit crimes mostly for fun, to show their courage, to

impress their peers or to attract their busy parents' attention or love.

7. 他们应该被给予改正的机会

They should be given some opportunities to be corrected rather than

being judged as adults who commit crime deliberately with full

awareness of the consequences.

8. 替代的办法

Instead of being jailed, young lawbreakers can be forced to repair the

damage to their neighbourhood or community, and offer their sincere

apology to the victims or do some community duties such as serving

the elderly in local nursing home.

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