2011.06.4雅思写作A类考试讲解

                                     --环球教育 徐俏雯

【图表作文题目】Task 1
Flow Diagram流程图-关于canned fruit的制作和销售过程。

【图表作文分析】
 三个月以来首次出现了流程图，虽然流程图考试出现频率不是很多，但难度还是相当的。烤鸭们在写流程图作文的时候需看清图表中的步骤划分；在步骤较繁琐，信息较多的情况下，需要把握大步骤，大步骤里包含小步骤，然后细心分析图表内容即可。

【议论文题目】Task 2
We can get knowledge from news, but some people think we can't trust the journalist. What do you think? What qualities should a journalist have?

【题目翻译】
我们可以通过新闻获取知识，但一些人认为不能相信记者。你的想法如何？记者需要具备怎样的素质？

【话题分类与题型】
本话题属媒体类话题，题型是分析解决型。

【话题评价】
媒体类话题也是热门话题之一，常考内容如media report，advertisement，television，internet等。这次大作文提到news和journalist，所以烤鸭们要先审题，抓住主要中心词展开论述；此话题也是旧题重现。

【结构与思路】
此文是属于“分析解决型”题目，即要回答题目中的两个问题What do you think? What qualities should a journalist have? 因此，此文章可以分四段，具体如下：

Introduction：重述背景知识，提出观点。

Body 1：新闻记者报道新闻知识的重要性。（extra knowledge from news，whether news reflect actual life or not，negative effect of deceptive news此段篇幅不大）

Body 2：新闻知识的真实性要求记者需要具备以下素质。(鉴于 negative effect from deceptive news，journalist 需具备以下基本素质：honesty，bravery，perseverance，observation，此段篇幅稍大)

Conclusion：概况观点，给予展望

【段落赏析】（以下是记者需具备素质的例子）

A trustworthy journalist must be an individual with honesty and integrity. In this day and age, there are a host of temptations to lure the reporter into fabricating stories. When confronted with such temptations, only professionals with high moral values can adhere to their code of ethics. Hence, the courage to always pursue and expose the truth about newsworthy events is really crucial to journalists.

Determination and tenacity distinguish fine journalists from mediocre ones. In today’s world, regarded as the conscience of society, a great many journalists find it increasingly difficult for them to come up with factual news stories. It is not usual that a journalist receives severe warnings or even death threats from gang members or business tycoons when they set out to trace crimes and business scandals. Hence, it takes immense determination and perseverance to be a genuinely dependable journalist.

A trustworthy journalist must be able to present keen observations on the covered events. To produce truly instructive coverage, a reporter must possess the capacity to analyze and synthesize the information he or she gathers. This requires penetrating insights and outstanding analytical skills. Only when an individual meets such requirements can he or she create in-depth coverage of events. (此段落源于《十天写作》书籍，仅做参考)