2011.05.28雅思写作A类考试讲解
--环球教育 徐俏雯
【图表作文题目】Task 1
The table below shows the population sizes and the rates of change for four different parts from 1950 to 2000 in the world, and predicted population sizes and the rates of change from 2000 to 2050.
【题目翻译】
表格显示出四个地区（North American，Australia，Europe, Japan）在1950年到2000年人口数量及变化，并预测2000年到2050年时间段的人口数量与变化。
【图表题型】
本图表属于表格（Table）
【图表作文分析】
表格类型的小作文需注意细心，部分烤鸭们看到数据多就开始紧张。所以建议烤鸭们看到表格类型的小作文的时候一定要耐心和细心分析数据和内容，如比较表格中横纵项数据，找出规律，然后归类总结即可。

【议论文题目】Task 2
Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students to judge what is right and wrong so that they can behave well. Others say that teachers should only teach students academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 
【题目翻译】
一些人认为老师应当负责教育学生判断是非，这样他们就能有好的表现。另外一些人则认为老师应当只教授学术科目。谈论双方观点并且给出你的观点。

【话题分类与题型】
本话题属教育类话题，题型是探讨双方型。

【话题评价】
此类型话题烤鸭们看到的时候心里应该有底，因为是教育类的话题的老题，很多时候是围绕客体（学校和学习内容）、主题（老师和学生）来展开。所以这次大作文难度不大。
【结构与思路】
此文是属于“探讨双方型”题目，很明显，题目中双方观点都有片面性。Teacher除了传授学生学术知识（academic knowledge）外，还需教会学生明辨是非（judge what is right and wrong）。这是学生全面发展的不可或缺的两方面。因此，此文章可以分四段，具体如下：
Introduction：重述背景知识，提出双方观点同样重要。
Body 1：教师传授学术知识的重要性。（从teacher’s obligation, importance of academic knowledge切入）
Body 2：教师还需教会学生明辨是非。(从defect of education system, adapt to society论述， parents’ help 作对比)
Conclusion：重申自己观点，教师应该从学生的德育和智育两方面来进行教育。

【范文赏析】（此赏析文章是五段式）
There is no denying that a teacher’s role in the overall development of a student is multifaceted. As a teacher, one’s primary obligation is to teacher students academic knowledge. Yet, it is equally important for him to make sure that the students make progresses in other aspects.
First of all, whether one can effectively pass academic knowledge to the students makes the first and most important criterion for judging him as a qualified or unqualified teacher. The main task for the students to perform at school is to lay a solid foundation for their study at a higher level, thus the task for a teacher is to assist them to achieve this goal.
Second, a teacher’s obligation is not just confined to passing on academic knowledge to the students. The students are also supposed to develop their ability to judge right from wrong, thus becoming good citizens when they step out of school. To do this, a teacher will have more roles to play than just teaching academic subjects. He will have to set a good example of morality himself and share or discuss with his students his viewpoints towards different phenomena in society. In a sense, apart from the role as a pure academic teacher, he also serves the roles of students’ parents at school.
Admittedly, a teacher can relatively be more sure about the academic progress pf the students, but not that sure about their moral development for the simple reason that society is a big dyeing pool in which one’s being dyed into a certain color is the result of many factors of which family and many other things also have a role to play. Therefore, seen from this perspective, the influence of a teacher is, after all, limited.
From the above discussion, we can come to the conclusion that apart from teaching students academic subjects, a teacher should also try his best to mould their personality and moral image. Meanwhile, the society as a whole is also supposed to work together to ensure the students’ overall development.  (此文章属于高分范文，仅做参考)